this is my attempt at rewriting a story I made when I was 7-8 for a class project it's probably going to be just as bad but whatever
Also ty phantom for your feedback on this rewrite as well as correcting my grammar and stuff :3 Love you you're very helpful
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A small story a friend and I wrote 3-4 years ago, we both decided to post it somewhere public so we can be judged together but never got around to it. We wrote this whilst in grade 7 so judge us with that in mind.