The note
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Fiction
Mystery
This story is a fiction little tale by mallory Szerokman it's about a girl named Nicole that was a traveler and she traveled to a place called desire avenue it was very creepy and spooky which she finds a note. A note that says HELP ME her brothers Charles and Ray were examining at the note. They found handprints and the girl was never to be seen but every time you drive by desire avenue you can hear her cries but they stopped. What does that mean? Does this mean that theirs a new mystery in the air? Does that mean theirs a killer on your lane? Are you the next victim.
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Moving In

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