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The promise
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Complete, First published Apr 30, 2015
Mature
(Currently editing/rewriting)

A story of a love that is out of this world! A story between Mason and Amira who met and fell in love in grade 12. They come from different culture and background which put their relationship to the test. He made a promise to her one night and she held him to his words forever. He was the high school hockey captain (Mr. Popular) and she was only trying to be a wallflower in this high school experience. 

When you meet the love of your life everything makes sense. In a million years they never knew they could experience something so out of this world so young.
A journey for the one thing in life that we are all capable of. Love.

New to writing and grammatical mistakes are sure to be made. sorry! 
Don't copy my work at all.
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Take a chance...enjoy reading, favorite comment. Be nice haha :)
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Rachel King
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She felt his warm palm on her wrist and at once she was facing him. Without warning, his lips engulfed hers, setting her on fire just like she did him. His lips were warm and soft and she revelled in it as she shut her eyes, her body instantly warming up to the kiss. She wrapped her arms around him, marvelling at how their bodies fit perfectly together. It felt so good, like her head was rotating. Nothing else mattered. Just the two of them. This was all she needed. Someone who accepted her for her. Her flaws, her beauty, herself, hook line and sinker. She withdrew reluctantly, angry she had to stop the kiss and also afraid someone had seen them. As she stared into his eager eyes, she knew she loved him but she couldn't help thinking she was doing the wrong thing. She loved him, but it wasn't fair to his girl. She could do anything, run, apologise, but she followed her heart. She drew him back and continued the kiss. A Nigerian themed story bound to leave you yearning for the next chapter.