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I am going to read 100 of my followers books and give them genuine feedback on their work. 

The name of the book in the cover is (after hours) and the authors name is: Author
(No hate btw, I also had no clue they are on wattpad. I just needed some kind of imagry to get the point across of how arduous this entire thing would be, go support author, they seem chill.)All Rights Reserved

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Algebra;The world of Wonderful creatures by Dil7249

Azen Zennora Thacker, the protagonist, embarks on a journey to uncover his bloodline, only to discover the dark history of his heritage. He comes to realize that the idea of the earth being owned by two-legged creatures is obsolete. "The true owners of the earth are not just humans, but also those who walk on four legs, fly with two, and all the creatures in between. ★★★★

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Star Wars: Stranded in a Magical World with my Lightsaber by HuntedAcolyte

When former Jedi guardian Ryu Chikara's ship crash-lands on a mysterious planet unlike any he's ever known, he finds himself far from the galaxy's conflicts-but no closer to peace. Aranthia, a realm where magic reigns and danger lurks at every turn, is on the brink of war. Among medieval castles and enchanted forests, orcs, elves, and beasts roam-none of whom have ever heard of the Force. Accompanied by his loyal tactical droid, Apollo, and his mechanic Lyra, Ryu's survival depends not only on his skill with a lightsaber but also his ability to navigate a strange new world where power lies not in technology, but in spells, swords, and ancient secrets. Along the way, Ryu rescues a lost beast folk child, Nikko, and joins forces with a beautiful elvish warrior, Talia. But when dark forces from the past reawaken, threatening both this world and the one he left behind, Ryu must confront his deepest fears and reconcile with the guilt that haunts him. As ancient prophecies stir and long-buried powers resurface, Ryu's destiny becomes entangled with Aranthia's own. Will he bring balance to a world teetering on the edge of chaos-or will he become the harbinger of its destruction? In this epic blend of sci-fi adventure and high fantasy, Stranded in a Magical World with my Lightsaber takes readers on a journey across two worlds colliding, where a hero must rediscover his purpose amidst shadowy forces, forgotten magic, and unlikely friendships.

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