m0gi gives 100 authors constructive critique of their stories
Mogitin
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  • Reads 186
  • Votes 30
  • Parts 2
  • Time 5m
Mogitin
Ongoing, First published Dec 13
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I am going to read 100 of my followers books and give them genuine feedback on their work. 

The name of the book in the cover is (after hours) and the authors name is: Author
(No hate btw, I also had no clue they are on wattpad. I just needed some kind of imagry to get the point across of how arduous this entire thing would be, go support author, they seem chill.)
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