Fury

To the readers,
Thank you for taking time out of your day to check out this story. As of right now (12/23/2024), this work is still a work in progress. As well as the first-ever original story I've written.
I want to improve my writing, please let me know in the comments if there are things I can do better. (as long as you're not straight-up insulting me lol) Tell me what you like/don't like. I'm always open to criticism.

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Sixteen-year-old Zayne is a young demigod who has the potential to grow up with so much power but is burdened by his lack of self-control over the ability known as The Fury. A power whose characteristics are unique only to the abilities of the one they belong to.

His parents vanished when he was only a child, and since then he's had to be under the care of a knowledgeable old family friend to teach him the ways of being a deity.

After learning a heart-aching truth, he has to deal with the lingering feeling of self-betrayal, impending doom, and before he is consumed by the shadows.