The Silent Treatment

The Silent Treatment

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My eyes shot open but was suddenly blinded by the bright lights that shone around me. I groaned and closed my eyes again as I fought the dots that clouded my vision. "Dannon!" Leo screamed as he lunged and hugged me tightly. "Oh my - Dan! You don't know how long I have waited for you to wake up! I came here everyday just to check on you." He word vomited, but I just coughed in response. "Oh sorry." He said as picked himself off me and pressed the nurse button on my bed. "The doctor needs to check up on you." He smiled brightly. "I'm so glad you are awake again. Everyone will be." "W-what...h-happened?"I said weakly. Whoa...that's what I sound like? All small and uneven? Maybe I should keep my vow of silence. He stared at me in disbelief...probably because this is the first time he has heard me speak in eight years. "Oh. U-um. T-the d-doctor should t-tell you." He stuttered, still in shock of my first words. I nodded. No more speaking from me. Not now. -why not? You need to practice. You sound like a little girl.- You're still here?!? -Well duh. You still have drugs in your system. AND you're a little loopy right now. But I think I will stay though, you need a conversation buddy.- Nope. Not with you. -Yep. It's settled. I'm staying.... I am you after all. - Dannon shepherd is just like any other high schools kid going through the dramas of life, but with an exception. He is mute, by choice that is. Plus he has a deep secret that not even he remembers. When he suddenly falls into a coma due to an old an injury, another personality inside him shows himself. Will Dannon be able to remember his past? or will he be driven insane by his alter personality?
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*COMPLETED* *EDITING ON PROCESS* "can you not be so horny for godsakes! I'm your bestfriend... remember?" I said throwing a fit, obviously panicking "'bestfriends'?... seriously?" he chuckled casually My ears were burning and my cheeks were on fire. This isnt him... but, at the same time it is him. "YES! all those times when we were younger, we ate, slept and played together. You've just been my friend for all my li-" I tried to explain him that our relationships have boundaries but he cut me off in the middle "cant we do that now?" he said with his lips parted, breathing heavily "like you said.... eat, sleep.. and play?" he smirked at my face inching closer towards me. That was it and I couldnt move any more. -------------------- Azalea Stevens is a 17 year old girl who goes to Somerfield High. Her life practically revolved around 5 boys, who ended up becoming her best friends. Everything was going smoothly for her, but one day day, her bestfriend stumbles back into his worst nightmares. The unseen misfortune that waits in disguise, reveals a beyond-the-science discovery of a superior species. Little did she know that, this misfortune began with her very bestfriend, who's now deeply entangled in the claws of a monster. He, was her first bestfriend, her first mistake and her first regret. And He, broke her. Will she be able to find the truth? Will she be able to hide her thoughts? Will she be able to hide her soul from his enchanting eyes? -------------------- [UNEDITED: contains grammatical mistakes (foetus writing- first few chapters). EDITING ON GOING. DISCLAIMER: This content is purely based on my own imagination. Plagarisation is not allowed and will not be entertained. All the characters are purely based on fiction and any resemblance of any characters to real life or other stories is purely conincidental.

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