Harry Potter and the Cursed Child (rewrited - first version)

Since I've heard that many Harry Potter fans didn't like the book, I'm writing my own version of the story, hoping that fans will like it more.
Many dialogues are directly taken from the original book, so... credits to J.K. Rowling, Jack Thorne & John Tiffany for what I've written that was in their book as well.
Also, I don't own the characters: J.K. Rowling does (unfortunately)

Plot: A new generation is now going to Hogwarts, and with it, new dangers threaten to destroy the peace created many years before with so many sacrifices. While Albus Potter and Scorpius Malfoy have to deal with a reputation they never wanted and Harry struggles to understand his middle child, dark forces start to awaken, following a new dark leader that threatens to destroy the past itself.
While trying to prove to his father, and to himself, that he's not a disappointment, Albus finds himself in the middle of something much bigger than him, something that might cost him everything. Luckily for him, he can rely on the help of an unlikely friendship, once again proving that true friendship can defy any darkness.

EDIT: This is the first version of my rewriting and I'll probably never finish this. On my channel you should be able to find a second or whatever version because I changed my mind a lot about the plot etc. I still like what I wrote here, though, and it's good to keep my old works to see the improvement :)