Coming Undone
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Last published Tue, May 5, 2015
"When Wes was alive and well none of us imagined that he would walk out the door one day soon and that we would never see him alive again. We never imagined it, but I dreamed it..."
All 17 year old Ella wants is to get through her last year of high school, hold onto her beautiful friendships, enjoy the experience of having her first boyfriend... and get over the death of her older brother, Wes.
She seems to be doing fine until the dreams start haunting her again. They're getting more powerful. Something or Someone from the world of her dreams - maybe from the Other Side - is trying to get through to her. The door is open wide and Ella knows she has a job to do. She has to find out what really happened to her brother.
Now that Ella has opened this portal can she step through it and get on with her life... without Coming Undone?
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