Be Careful What You Wish For (Rough Draft)
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Last published Wed, May 10, 2017
Allison is your typical loser. Nothing good ever happens to her. So when a creepy old lady says she'll grant her one wish, Allison doesn't believe her. But when the wish she made to have a friend exactly like her comes true, Allison doesn't know what to believe. Her reflection starts talking to her, giving her whatever she wanted. But everything comes with a price. And if the girl in the mirror is Allison, how can she defeat her reflection - without defeating herself?
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