Kaiju Paradise: The Rise Of Laminax Rewrite

(This is a rewrite to my old cringy book I made a long time ago)
Prologue summary: At a very young age, Yukio had lost her parents from an unknown cause. She was taken in by her parent's friend, Ben, though he wouldn't tell her how her parents died exactly, but she never thought about it
Yukio is in the need of a job. She got fired from her job and now doesn't have anywhere to go. Until she found a flier where it could offer her a job, "Laminax laboratories". When she applied for the job, She made friends, until weird things start to happen. Very strange things.
Will she and her friends escape Laminax laboratories and put the end to this corporation And find their secrets? Or fail..?
If you have any suggestions or advice to make the book better, plz let me know! That would be nice

Credit to: credit to @Kennedy042 and @DollWill_murderuall9 for helping making the characters and the book! If it weren't for the motivation, I wouldn't have made this book. Thank you @Dude98362 for letting me put some of his characters in the rewrite! You should check out his stories! Credit to my other friend (she doesn't have wattpad) for helping with the little romance stuff since I'm not too good at it!
(There is no smut like ew wtf is wrong with you? 😭🙏)