Forsaken Minds
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The asylum was supposed to be empty.
But when Dr. Evelyn Carter steps inside, the air feels alive-thick with whispers, memories, and something far worse. "Did you hear that?" Marcus mutters, but Sophia's voice trembles: "It's not the living you should fear here."
Locked doors creak open. Shadows twist and shift. And a voice calls softly from the darkness: "You shouldn't have come."
What lies within these walls refuses to stay buried. But some truths are better left forgotten.
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