The First Alicorn
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Last published Sun, Jun 15, 2025
Who was the first Alicorn? What happened to him, and where did he disappear to? How did his actions shape the rise of villains and monsters like Sombra and Chrysalis? Most importantly, what will happen if he returns to unveil the truth behind everything-including the mysterious connection between the Moon and Twilight? In this journey, he will be aided by his former student, Sombra, who once betrayed him. Now, Sombra must change his ways and work to atone for his past mistakes.
This story follows the return of the first Alicorn as he seeks to right his ancient wrongs, revealing not only the truth behind his own actions but also the hidden secrets surrounding the princesses.
Sombra, the once-loyal student who betrayed his teacher and stole what he cherished most, must now secretly return. To redeem himself, he will help his former mentor correct the mistakes of the past, even as he struggles to confront his own guilt and transform into someone better.
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