A girl's gun

Introduction
I'm just translating my story because I wrote it in portuguese. Paloma is a seventeen years old girl that has an awesome attitude and an amazing best friend named Francisco.Her mother did awful things and left her and her brother named Jake (He barely shows up at home because he's busy partying). She's a rebel but sweet girl that has an awesome life (if we don't think about her family and her anger issues). She sees her life turning upside down when an unwanted person shows up in her town. She will have a a lot of problems do deal with if she wants her and her best friend alive. Will she fight back and have the life she always wanted?
We'll see ;)