The Mummy (Imhotep's Love Story) Rewrite

Hello! Quick Note: This is a rewrite my first 'The Mummy (Imhotep Love Story)' Story, I kept some parts from the original and edited it, so I hope this version makes more sense, I hope you enjoy the story, now on to the description!
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Her name is Lily, youngest sister of Evelyn and Jonathan Carnahan, she's an archaeologist who specialized in Ancient Egypt and Ancient Asian history. At a young age her mother and father decided that she should take classes to protect herself and others. She was a natural, when they died she continued to take the classes. She learned how to fight with a sword and how to shoot a gun. After finishing school and going on dig sites she was able to graduate early despite the many hardships she had to overcome at the age of 17, after taking a year to herself she finally decided to visit her older sister at her work place in Cairo. Little did she know that her life was going to change, for better or for worse, well...only Shai knew.