The Evil Behind the Comfort

The Evil Behind the Comfort

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This is actually my first story that I have ever completed. I'm actually really excited about it! If anyone has any suggestions feel free to comment and let me know. Sorry about the title change, but I think this sounds a lot better. So, anyway here it goes... This is the story of a man named Adam. He awakes in a strange room, in a strange world, and in a strange mind. His memories have been erased. Now, his only clue to escape and the re-discovery of his memories is a letter written by an unknown author. Having to face the horrors of the building he was trapped in, Adam must find his way out, finding his memory and himself along the way.
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