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What am I doing wrong?
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NatsucchiNyan
Kumpleto, Unang na-publish Jan 25, 2025
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Everything crossed the line. The family is being broken. Edin tried to make sure that he will struggle more but Ellison was irresistible. And now his little girl Ildy is deprived of mother's care. He has got broken heart. 

I would like to say that it's just a short part of my future artwork that I'm gonna make as visual novel. One of the possible version of the actions. You can left your fear and read. There are no more serious spoilers. And the last fact: I translated the story into Ukrainian to English and it was my first experience, so I will be glad to get your objective critic how do better in the next time.
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Hoping for a better future (DadforAll)

26 mga parte Kumpleto

After loosing everything little Izuku is left with nothing but sadness. Life can be so cruel sometimes but at the same time you never know what life has to offer. Seeing this child al helpless made one certain hero weak to his heart.... Do i really need to say more? This is a DadforAll story, enjoy it! A/N: This is a mha fanstory hope you enjoy! Please also feel free to correct my bad writing. Rights on the pictures go to the artist. I do not own mha, rights to the owner.

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