What am I doing wrong?
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Everything crossed the line. The family is being broken. Edin tried to make sure that he will struggle more bur Ellison was irresistible. And now his little girl Ildy is deprived of mother's care. He has got broken heart. 

I would like to say that it's just a short part of my future artwork that I'm gonna make as visual novel. One of the possible version of the actions. You can left your fear and read. There are no more serious spoilers. And the last fact: I translated the story into Ukrainian to English and it was my first experience, so I will be glad to get your objective critic how do better in the next time.
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