Surrender
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Last published Sun, May 3, 2015
Alfie is a 18 year old boy who is falling in and out of love with girls, but there is one he cant stop loving. Zoe is a 17 year old girl, she lives with her older brother Joe and her Dad, Bill. She too has feelings for Alfie but feels he doesn't feel the same. After having many experiences of awkward moments, Zoe and Alfie finally have an intermit moment. Finally after what feels for like forever, Alfie finally surrenders to his feelings and tells Zoe he loves her. Will they have there happily ever after? Or are they just not meant to be?
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