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Ongoing, First published Feb 04
Mature
For the ONC 2025 Contest!

Prompt: A supervillain has a midlife crisis and decides to become a superhero. But redemption might be harder than they imagined.

He can see the future. She can read minds. A chance encounter throws everything they know about themselves - and each other - into chaos. What can a hero and villain do when they already know how things end?
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