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Becoming Eloise

Becoming Eloise

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WpMetadataNoticeLast published Sun, Dec 21, 2025
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Eloise Bellanova is kind, clumsy, anxiety stricken, confused, but utterly funny. She is everything, and yet, somehow, not enough. Until one person appears. One spark. One moment that shifts everything she thought she knew about herself. Suddenly, being Eloise isn't just being herself anymore it's becoming someone she never imagined she could be. Sneak peak from chapter 3 :) "So how did it go with the hot customer?" She says all giddy, bouncing up and down while she is sat. I roll my eyes and smile at her as I start to get dressed. "Uh, he helped me change the tire and then we went on our way." I say simply, before throwing on my sports bra. "Are you fucking kidding me?! Thats it? You didn't get his number or anything?" She says shockingly. Her eyes following me around my room as I throw on my leggings. "Faye he's a customer, and I just met the guy. I gave him a good recommendation and he helped me with my tire and thats it." I say giving her that 'don't press it look'. I watch as she rolls her eyes and throws her body back on the bed groaning loudly. "El are you for real? He was checking you out that whole transaction, and when you bent down to grab that eighth his eyes never left your ass. This guy is your ticket to love. Im calling it right now." She says mater of factly and crosses her arms over her chest with a humph. "Faye, I think thats pushing it off of only one transaction and a tire replacement." I laugh and walk over to my makeup vanity, starting to pull out all my makeup. "You know damn well that it wasn't." She says turning towards me. "You keep saying you need this 'break' well the world just threw it in your face and you still can't even see it." I feel my stomach churn and I shake my head softly before I turn back to my makeup and start to do it. Was she right? It seems far fetched to me.
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Six months. Ten million dollars. One fake engagement between a venomous high-society ice queen... and the stubborn, broke girl caught in her diamond cage. The deal was simple: wear her ring. smile for the cameras. play the perfect fiancée. survive her world. walk away paid. But Eloise Laurent doesn't play fair. And every glance. every fight. every slow, burning touch twists the game into something darker - and far more dangerous - than either of them ever intended. Because the most dangerous thing to fake... is love.

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