Becoming Eloise

Becoming Eloise

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Eloise Bellanova is kind, clumsy, anxiety stricken, confused, but utterly funny. She is everything, and yet, somehow, not enough. Until one person appears. One spark. One moment that shifts everything she thought she knew about herself. Suddenly, being Eloise isn't just being herself anymore it's becoming someone she never imagined she could be. Sneak peak from chapter 3 :) "So how did it go with the hot customer?" She says all giddy, bouncing up and down while she is sat. I roll my eyes and smile at her as I start to get dressed. "Uh, he helped me change the tire and then we went on our way." I say simply, before throwing on my sports bra. "Are you fucking kidding me?! Thats it? You didn't get his number or anything?" She says shockingly. Her eyes following me around my room as I throw on my leggings. "Faye he's a customer, and I just met the guy. I gave him a good recommendation and he helped me with my tire and thats it." I say giving her that 'don't press it look'. I watch as she rolls her eyes and throws her body back on the bed groaning loudly. "El are you for real? He was checking you out that whole transaction, and when you bent down to grab that eighth his eyes never left your ass. This guy is your ticket to love. Im calling it right now." She says mater of factly and crosses her arms over her chest with a humph. "Faye, I think thats pushing it off of only one transaction and a tire replacement." I laugh and walk over to my makeup vanity, starting to pull out all my makeup. "You know damn well that it wasn't." She says turning towards me. "You keep saying you need this 'break' well the world just threw it in your face and you still can't even see it." I feel my stomach churn and I shake my head softly before I turn back to my makeup and start to do it. Was she right? It seems far fetched to me.
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He brought his hands up and tucked my hair behind my ear. coming closer to my ear "Do i arouse you?" he whispered, making my knees weak "I can feel the heat radiating off you and i know you are soaking wet already" What the hell? Pushing him off me i straightened up and glared at him "You are now my boss starting tomorrow and i dont think it is appropriate to use comments like that with an employee." He suddenly jammed on the elevator emergency button, causing the elevator to stop. "Really? That would make this more exciting and easier. "I am attracted to you, you are attracted to me. Lets fuck and be fine" I stared at him wide eyed Has this man gone mad? I admit that he is hot and affects me a little but that doesn't mean i want to jump into bed with him, he is my boss for crying out loud and i really need this job" He was now standing in front of me with his face close to mine staring at my lips. I want to kiss you" He whispered making me feel chills all over my body. ***************************************************** Blake Greyson wasn't born with a silver spoon but he worked all his life to get to the top. Too as one of the eligible billionaires in Florida with his beautiful girlfriend Anna by his side every step away. Mellisa Wakefield is a young woman in her early twenties who is yet to get her life together. She fails miserably in whatever she does and her sister never misses the opportunity to remind her of how much of a loser she was until she got a job at Greyson's enterprise. Two different people tangled into a life of love, sex and betrayal.

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