Rachel's Turn

Rachel's Turn

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"Out of nowhere, all the conversations that they had exchanged about life and personal thoughts seemed to fall into perfect order as soon as he laid eyes on her in her pink dress. She was not a little girl anymore. Something deep inside him started stirring and he knew he would never look at her the same."- Ryan Rachel Taylor is the baby sister of 3 girls. Her family sees her as the sweet and innocent little girl, despite the fact that she was 18 now and starting her senior year of high school. At school she was neither popular or unpopular, she was just Rachel. Everyone knew her and she had a few close friends but never a boyfriend. People liked her but always as a friend. She was never seen in a romantic way by boys. She didn't want every guy to look at her that way, just one special guy at school,Cole. If she were being honest, she liked someone else more than anything but he was her sisters friend and a 5 years older. She had known Ryan since she was about 12 years old and was now reduced to a pen pal since he was in the navy. Rachel would take any type of relationship with him she could get. Is Ryan the only set of eyes that Rachel catches? Is Rachel's heart big enough for both? *this is Completed but will be edited later*
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As a wedding planner, Rachel has seen it all. From botched wedding dresses to caterers who couldn't even make a simple pot of coffee. Watching the love, the compassion, the devotion between each and every couple, the utter admiration between them... it made her sick. Money was her motivator and Rachel refused to change her ways. But when a client approaches her, with the most curious request, she couldn't bring herself to say no. Following her client through the start of his journey, to the end, something began to stir deep within her heart... Would this curious client be able to melt the ice within her heart?

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