Mix ups, Fall outs and Coincidences

Scarlet Hargrave was a normal 17 year old girl. Sorry, I mean is. Scarlet is a normal 17 year old girl, with slight mental abnormalities. Who knows and who cares? No one. Not even Scarlet herself. The truth is Scarlet is quiet and closed up, no friends except for the willow woods. Gale Morris is a wolf. Not quite a lone wolf but not quite a part of his pack. A shadow of an outcast maybe. No one would ever think that these two different creatures would have a connection, but they do. They are alone and in trouble. This is only my second book so please give me some constructive critic advice :) (Don't be to mean though...)