Dandelion in the Biome

I'm so excited about my first time writing. I've wanted to write for a long time, but lacked the confidence to move forward. I've recently become motivated to move forward with my goal of becoming a published author.

Pretty please comment. I need your comments to get better or to tell me when I am on track.

There is more to come, but this is my start. I'm going to share snipets of the story as I write it but not the story in its entirety.

The story is about a sweet quiet girl who is ripped apart due to a family secret. It outlines her life and provides an explanation to why Edith is the way she is: socially detached, depressed, unable to express herself, masked by her truth. If only people knew what was happening to her. Everything changed when her step father came in to her life. Would anyone help her end the madness or would she have to end it herself? and how? Follow Edith as she embarks on a fight for her life.