Reflect
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First time writing just looking for feedback.
A Test Draft for a story that follows Storm, a young man on a journey to discover more about his past while trying to master his mirror creation, an ability he believed to be weak his whole life. On his journey, he uncovers the secrets of a lost kingdom that are being covered up by the holy church and the king making an enemy of the most powerful kingdom on the continent.
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