Compelling 12
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Last published Mon, Mar 30, 2026
Desdemona Fitzmorris was known as the sweetest girl in Tommen, quiet and compelling, generous and compassionate. Everybody knew that she would never harm a fly, but nobody ever knew what was going on at home.
After a clash in the music rooms with a certain number 12, will her home life scare away the boy who had secretly had eyes on her since first year?
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