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Critique Shop [Closed for new entries till April]

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Calling all ONC writers! ✨🚀 
 
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If you're participating in ONC or Wattys or any major writing contests and need an extra set of eyes on your story, I've got you covered! I'll be providing outline reviews and inline comments to help with plot, pacing, and character depth. Whether you need help refining your synopsis, sharpening your hook, or making your dialogue pop, I'm here to assist! 🚀

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