Freedom's Trap
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Ongoing5m
Last published Wed, May 6, 2015
This is a little story Eggplant wrote ages go. To be completely honest I really like it, but I thought you guys might read it and find, if anything that I may have improved in my writing skill. Think of it as a short story in with to compare my old writing and new writing styles with . -This was also entered in a competition but didn't win anything- (You can see why XD )
A story about a little girl who lives in Tasmania, (In Australia). In a futuristic world, where adults have decided that they have to kill all the children to survive.
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