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Ongoing, First published Mar 12, 2025
What if the story of our Balaveer and vivan unfolded into a whole different universe!? What if their relationship was a bit different!? What if the unacknowledged distance between them remained between them for a prolonged period of time!? What if Baalveer never lost his memory!? What if vivan never asked him to enter not just his life but his house and his heart as well!? What if they faced a thousand challenges but struggled to mould their bond? What if they had those unexpected nok-jhoks they never had?what if they did not carried a major place for each other in their hearts? what if their bond turned upside down so unexpectedly that they never thought it to be?What if a series of events brought them together such that they marked their journeies from "never to "forever" What if the original Devivan got to know about all this?

Remember-"Every story is a different one" 
 I just want to portray them on a bit deeper level..I just want to show what's been not completely acknowledged along with the battles and Challanges they face that is , their CAPTIVATING HISTORY.

THEME:-
Koi toh ho mera apna..
Koi toh sahara ho...
Gum mere theher toh jaye...
Koi kinara ho..
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Taqdeee tumse jabse se judi hain..
Zindagi mein sukoon,khushiyan he hain....
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