Lost in the stars
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Last published Sun, Dec 7, 2025
THIS IS MY VERY FIRST BOOK LIKE I HAVE NEVER WRITTEN ANY OTHER BOOK IN MY LIFE
IF THIS IS TRASH PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS TO TELL ME HOW I CAN IMPROVE IT.
I APPRECIATE CRITICISMS BUT IF YOU GO TOO FAR I SHALL REPORT YOU.
Also I'm busy so don't expect constant updates
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