Equestria Criminal Investigative Service

Equestria Criminal Investigative Service

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WpMetadataNoticeLast published Mon, Jun 29, 2026
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My Little Pony
Long ago, in the Land of Equestria, two Royal sisters ruled with peace and harmony. The elder used her Unicorn magic to raise the sun, and bring about the day. The younger used her magic to raise the moon, and bring the night. Thus, peace and harmony reigned for years. However, the younger sister became resentful, as ponies relished and played in the daytime her sister brought, but shunned and slept through her beautiful night. Then one day, the younger sister refused to lower moon to make way for the dawn. As such, the hatred in her heart turned her into a wicked mare of darkness: Nightmare Moon. Left with no choice, the elder sister called upon the most powerful relics in all of ponydom: the Elements of Harmony. Using the power of the Elements of Harmony, the elder sister defeated Nightmare Moon, banishing and sealing her in the moon. Afterwards, the elder sister took the responsibility of both the sun and moon, and peace and harmony has reigned ever since... or has it? What if there were an organization deep in the shadows who had not only WORKED in the night the younger sister brought, but committed crimes? That's EXACTLY what had happened, but the two sisters didn't know it until it was too late. However, thanks to the work of the EUP Guard, which had been formed to protect the elder sister, this group had been stopped. However, what if they came back? Meet Gold Shield, a Unicorn colt who lost his parents, and was abandoned by his other family members. He was your average colt, nothing special, but he had a knack for spotting trouble. That's what caused him to save a young Twilight Sparkle as she was studying for a test. Yet, he didn't stop there. He went on to CONTINUE helping her by studying with her until she got every spell down, even going as far as to show her a concentration technique. However, what if he were to notice a pattern in the attacks, and even thwart one during Twilight's test? What if it lead to him discovering his special talent?
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In this story, Princess Luna is faced with her inner demons, but she only has the will to suppress them for so long. Princess Celestia suspects something is happening with her dear sister, yet she can't figure it out. Whenever she asks Luna, Luna can't speak due to a curse. However as Celestia questions Luna, Luna's inner demons grow stronger. She ends up entering her inner self and attempts to fight it, but when she loses, all hell breaks loose and this time the elements can't stop this enemy, because as Luna loses. The elements of harmony are destroyed due to an ancient and forgotten power that Luna's inner demon knows about. It is left up to a single alicorn to fight off this terrifying antagonist. Will this be the end of Equestria as we know it, or will the single alicorn sate the disaster?

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