Equestria Criminal Investigative Service

Equestria Criminal Investigative Service

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Long ago, in the Land of Equestria, two Royal sisters ruled with peace and harmony. The elder used her Unicorn magic to raise the sun, and bring about the day. The younger used her magic to raise the moon, and bring the night. Thus, peace and harmony reigned for years. However, the younger sister became resentful, as ponies relished and played in the daytime her sister brought, but shunned and slept through her beautiful night. Then one day, the younger sister refused to lower moon to make way for the dawn. As such, the hatred in her heart turned her into a wicked mare of darkness: Nightmare Moon. Left with no choice, the elder sister called upon the most powerful relics in all of ponydom: the Elements of Harmony. Using the power of the Elements of Harmony, the elder sister defeated Nightmare Moon, banishing and sealing her in the moon. Afterwards, the elder sister took the responsibility of both the sun and moon, and peace and harmony has reigned ever since... or has it? What if there were an organization deep in the shadows who had not only WORKED in the night the younger sister brought, but committed crimes? That's EXACTLY what had happened, but the two sisters didn't know it until it was too late. However, thanks to the work of the EUP Guard, which had been formed to protect the elder sister, this group had been stopped. However, what if they came back? Meet Gold Shield, a Unicorn colt who lost his parents, and was abandoned by his other family members. He was your average colt, nothing special, but he had a knack for spotting trouble. That's what caused him to save a young Twilight Sparkle as she was studying for a test. Yet, he didn't stop there. He went on to CONTINUE helping her by studying with her until she got every spell down, even going as far as to show her a concentration technique. However, what if he were to notice a pattern in the attacks, and even thwart one during Twilight's test? What if it lead to him discovering his special talent?
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Awoken

From the very first time she pulled the lever on the Pegasus Device, the little black and purple Pegasus was happy. She stayed that way for a long time. Four years to be exact. She grew from a weak little filly, into a strong young adult, but growing up comes with a price. Growing up has made this mare realize that she had gotten her revenge long ago. She no longer needed the comfort of killing the ponies that had been so cruel to her before. In fact, she no longer wanted it. She had finally realized that what she was doing was morbid and wrong. Now each time she pulled that dreaded lever, she would look away, to avoid watching the gruesome deaths. She couldn't take it anymore. This filly wanted out. But there was one problem... Becoming an employee of the upper Rainbow Factory means sacrificing any life outside those black walls. Workers are sworn to secrecy and forbidden from leaving, and live inside the facility itself. Those few who ever manage to make it out not in a body bag are twisted and disturbed, too damaged to ever bring themselves to talk about it. There is no escaping the factory... Or is there? So you may ask, why am I telling you this? Why do you care? Well, I felt that this story needed to be told. It's the story of the pony who DID escape. The pony who saved one filly's life, and later, the lives of thousands more. This is the story of a pony who shut down one of the most dangerous facilities in Equestria. And if you haven't already guessed it, that pony is me. My name is Moonlight Mystery, and this is the story of my life. My life, which would have been nothing if I hadn't woken up from this horrible place. All these years, I've stoked the fire, seen more pain than you could ever know...The tears of the broken, have washed away my soul. Now I'm pushed by desire to change the way my stream will flow, because now I'm Awoken, and I'm taking back control.

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