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Whipped
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Life seems dark and pointless when Anjie finds herself moving away from the home and family she's loved all her life. She is forced to move all the way across the country where everything is unfamiliar: The people, the places, and even the weather. But she soon finds love and comfort is closer than she ever thought would be possible. She soon finds herself whipped, and she likes it. [Update: So it's been like four years since I started this story, and I haven't uploaded a chapter in two years. However, I'd like to finish off this story after all this time. Unfortunately there are a few problems to consider. 1) Whipped is a story that is very heavily based off of real people (meaning the characters are based off of people I know, but the actual story is fictional), but most of the people are no longer in my life. Awkward. 2) The story is basically a culmination of inside jokes providing comic relief for emotional problems that I am no longer dealing with. Hmm.. 3) I had already been working on the chapter that was supposed to come next (now this is two years ago mind you) and I had it stored on my computer, but my computer completely crashed. So I no longer have the next chapter. This is a minor problem since I can rewrite the chapter. I just wanted to voice my frustration. I also lost the ending to the story. I wrote a pretty bomb ass finishing chapter in a random bout of inspiration. And now's it's gone. Ugh. With all of that being said, I'm first going to go back and edit all of the chapters that have already been posted. I'm going to tweak the plot here and there to account for things that my older self feels don't make sense. Plus I'd like to believe I'm a better writer than I used to be. Then I will pick up where the story left off. Part of me wants to completely change the story to make it better, but that takes way too much effort, so I'm continuing with the original plan I thought up years ago. Oh dear. ]
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[PREVIOUSLY THE GIRL BEHIND HER SMILE] Book 1 of the lost series _ _ _ He swallows, taking a small step forwards towards me, "I know it's really hard to believe my words right now. But I would never intentionaly hurt you like I did. I keep my promises, and I uphold them as much as I can. And I meant every word of my apology Eliza, back then at the rink, and now at your door." "Your apology can't change the past, it can't heal the wounds you made." I reply quietly. "No, but time can. And I am going to do every fucking thing I can to prove to you how much I meant what I said." "It's a waste of time." "Not mine," He lets a singular heartbeat pass before continuing, "I think you're worth every second of it." _ _ _ Eliza Hayashi - A 16 year old girl who is dealing with the recent loss of her father, and the tribulations that come with grief. Her heart is always heavy but she never falters to hide the weight it carries, smiling and pretending has become the new normal for her. Jasper Hastings - A transfer student, who seems to have the entire school wrapped around his fingers, with money, power and influence, this 17 year old can get away with everything. Harbouring secrets, and an entirely different persona under his aloof smile, he chooses Eliza to becomes new muse. Angered by her distaste towards him, her pain becomes his goal - until it doesn't With secrets impending in every hallway, and rivalry between the people she loves, follow Eliza as she unveils the truth about herself and her family - and discover how she deals with her conflicting feelings towards the one boy her twin despises. _ _ _ - the first few chapters are a teeny bit cringe, but my writing does develop as the story progresses :) - I will come back once I've finished the story to re-edit and improve earlier chapters! _ _ _ creds to canva for the cover :) _ _ _ RANKS: #1 - DYSFUNCTIONAL FAMILY - 31/03/2023 #8 - DYSFUNCTIONAL - 11/11/2023 #3 - DYSFUNCTIONAL - 22/07/2023

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