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A preview chapter of a novel I've been working on recently, Hope to just get some reviews on it
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An OC review book for those who want feedback on their characters. I give constructive criticism and I try to give non-biased feedback. Started: July 2017 Completed: October 2017 Highest Ranking: #702 in RandomAbgeschlossene Geschichte
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━━━━ 𝗗𝗥𝗔𝗙𝗧 𝗥𝗘𝗩𝗘𝗔𝗟 𝘪𝘯 𝘸𝘩𝘪𝘤𝘩 𝘪 𝘴𝘩𝘰𝘸 𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘰𝘧 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘭𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘭𝘺 𝘱𝘦𝘰𝘱𝘭𝘦 𝘮𝘺 𝘣𝘰𝘰𝘬𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘰𝘳𝘪𝘨𝘪𝘯𝘢𝘭 𝘴𝘵𝘰𝘳𝘪𝘦𝘴 𝗼𝗿 𝘪𝘯 𝘸𝘩𝘪𝘤𝘩 𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘰𝘧 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘭𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘭𝘺 𝘱𝘦𝘰𝘱𝘭𝘦 𝘤𝘩𝘰𝘰𝘴𝘦 𝘸𝘩𝘪𝘤𝘩 𝘣𝘰𝘰𝘬𝘴 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘭𝘪𝘬𝘦 𝘣𝘦𝘴𝘵 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘸𝘩𝘪𝘤𝘩 𝘰𝘯𝘦𝘴 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘸𝘢𝘯 𝘵 𝘵𝘰 𝘴𝘦𝘦
medea of akyros
this is a rough draft in the process of being written no ai was used in the making of this. you are not to put my work into LLMs or generative ai. I will literally curse you. legal action will be taken if you violate my rights im so fed up of ai
𝕭𝖎𝖙𝖘 𝖆𝖓𝖉 𝕻𝖎𝖊𝖈𝖊𝖘
ᴘɪʟᴏᴍᴀ ᴅᴀᴠɪɴꜱᴋʏ ɪꜱ ᴀ ɴᴏʀᴍᴀʟ ɢɪʀʟ ᴜɴᴛɪʟ ᴏɴᴇ ᴅᴀʏ ꜱʜᴇ ʀᴇᴀʟɪᴢᴇꜱ ʜᴇʀ ʙᴇꜱᴛ ꜰʀɪᴇɴᴅ, ᴡʜᴏ ᴇᴠᴇʀʏᴏɴᴇ ʙᴇʟɪᴇᴠᴇꜱ ɪꜱ ᴀ ʜᴀʟʟᴜᴄɪɴᴀᴛɪᴏɴ, ᴘᴜʟʟꜱ ʜᴇʀ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴀɴᴏᴛʜᴇʀ ʀᴇᴀʟɪᴛʏ. ꜱʜᴇ ꜰɪɴᴅꜱ ᴏᴜᴛ ꜱᴏᴍᴇᴛʜɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴄʜᴀɴɢᴇꜱ ʜᴇʀ ʟɪꜰᴇ ꜰᴏʀᴇᴠᴇʀ. ꜱʜᴇ ᴇɴᴅꜱ ᴜᴘ ʜᴀᴠɪɴɢ ᴛᴏ ʙᴀᴛᴛʟᴇ ᴜɴᴛɪʟ ᴛʜᴇ ʟᴀꜱᴛ ʙʀᴇᴀᴛʜ. ꜱʜᴇ ᴀʟꜱᴏ ʜᴀꜱ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇʟᴘ ᴇᴠᴇʀʏᴏɴᴇ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ɪꜱ ᴛʀᴀᴘᴘᴇᴅ ɪɴ ᴀ ᴊᴀɪʟ ʙʏ ᴅᴇᴍᴏɴꜱ. ᴡɪʟʟ ᴘɪʟᴏᴍᴀ ꜱᴜᴄᴄᴇᴇᴅ ᴀɴᴅ ʜᴇʟᴘ ᴇᴠᴇʀʏᴏɴᴇ ʙᴀ ᴄᴋ ʜᴏᴍᴇ? ᴏʀ ᴡɪʟʟ ꜱʜᴇ ꜰᴀɪʟ ᴀɴᴅ ʟᴇᴀᴠᴇ ᴇᴠᴇʀʏᴏɴᴇ ᴛᴏ ꜱᴜꜰꜰᴇʀ?Abgeschlossene Geschichte
route 66 & motel cigs : a jeffrey dean morgan daydream
❕slow updates❕ • my vision of a route 66 roadtrip movie featuring jdm, but on paper instead of on screen, directed by lana del rey. • english is not my native language, and this is my first time writing - thank you for your understanding ALL FEEDBACK IS STRONGLY APPRECIATED🩶
Connected By Destiny's
𝑴𝒆𝒕 𝒅𝒖𝒆 𝒕𝒐 𝒅𝒆𝒔𝒕𝒊𝒏𝒚'𝒔 𝒑𝒍𝒂𝒏,𝒃𝒖𝒕 𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒓𝒆 𝒊𝒔 𝒎𝒐𝒓𝒆 𝒕𝒐 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒔𝒕𝒐𝒓𝒚,𝒆𝒗𝒆𝒓𝒚 𝒄𝒉𝒂𝒓𝒂𝒄𝒕𝒆𝒓 𝒉𝒂𝒔 𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒊𝒓 𝒐𝒘𝒏 𝒔𝒕𝒐𝒓𝒚! 𝑾𝒉𝒂𝒕 𝒉𝒂𝒑𝒑𝒆𝒏𝒔 𝒘𝒉𝒆𝒏 𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒚 𝒎𝒆𝒆𝒕 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒊𝒓 𝒑𝒂𝒔𝒕, 𝒑𝒓𝒆𝒔𝒆𝒏𝒕 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒇𝒖𝒕𝒖𝒓𝒆 𝒂𝒓 𝒆 𝒇𝒊𝒈𝒉𝒕𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒘𝒊𝒕𝒉 𝒅𝒆𝒔𝒕𝒊𝒏𝒚 𝒕𝒐 𝒄𝒉𝒂𝒏𝒈𝒆 𝒊𝒕!? 𝑾𝒊𝒍𝒍 𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒚 𝒃𝒆 𝒂𝒃𝒍𝒆 𝒕𝒐 𝒃𝒆 𝒕𝒐𝒈𝒆𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒓 𝒐𝒓 𝒘𝒊𝒍𝒍 𝒅𝒆𝒔𝒕𝒊𝒏𝒚 𝒔𝒆𝒑𝒂𝒓𝒂𝒕𝒆 𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒎?
Deceptive Stars
𝕀𝕟 𝕨𝕙𝕚𝕔𝕙 𝕀 𝕥𝕠𝕠𝕜 𝕥𝕨𝕠 ℝ𝕖𝕕𝕕𝕚𝕥 𝕨𝕣𝕚𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕡𝕣𝕠𝕞𝕡𝕥𝕤 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕥𝕣𝕒𝕟𝕤𝕗𝕠𝕣𝕞 𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕞 𝕚𝕟𝕥𝕠 𝕒 𝕤𝕥𝕠𝕣𝕪 𝕣𝕖𝕧𝕠𝕝𝕧𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕒𝕣𝕠𝕦𝕟𝕕 𝕞𝕪 𝕗𝕒𝕟𝕥𝕒𝕤𝕪 𝕨𝕠𝕣𝕝𝕕 𝕍𝕖𝕪𝕣𝕚𝕠𝕟. 𝕋𝕙𝕚𝕤 𝕚𝕤 𝕒 𝕝𝕚𝕥𝕥𝕝𝕖 𝕓𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕜 𝕗𝕣𝕠𝕞 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕍𝕒𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕪 ℂ𝕒𝕥𝕤 𝕤𝕖𝕣𝕚𝕖𝕤 𝕒𝕤 𝕀 𝕨𝕒𝕟𝕥 𝕥𝕠 𝕥𝕣𝕪 𝕠𝕦𝕥 𝕤𝕠𝕞𝕖𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕟𝕖𝕨. -•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•-•- 🌟 = 𝕔𝕙𝕒𝕡𝕥𝕖𝕣 𝕞𝕒𝕚𝕟𝕝𝕪 𝕣𝕖𝕧𝕠𝕝𝕧𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕒𝕣𝕠𝕦𝕟𝕕 𝕀𝕤𝕒𝕚𝕒𝕙 ❄️ = 𝕔𝕙𝕒𝕡𝕥𝕖𝕣 𝕞𝕒𝕚𝕟𝕝𝕪 𝕣𝕖𝕧𝕠𝕝𝕧𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕒𝕣𝕠𝕦𝕟𝕕 𝔸𝕝𝕚𝕟𝕒
𝐓𝐈𝐌𝐄 𝐀𝐅𝐓𝐄𝐑 𝐓𝐈𝐌𝐄, 𝐒𝐓𝐄𝐕𝐄 𝐇𝐀𝐑𝐑𝐈𝐍𝐆𝐓𝐎𝐍
𝐈𝐍 𝐖𝐇𝐄𝐑𝐄, 𝐈𝐯𝐲 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐬 𝐛𝐚𝐜𝐤 𝐭𝐨 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐡𝐨𝐦𝐞 𝐭𝐨𝐰𝐧 𝐨𝐧𝐥𝐲 𝐭𝐨 𝐟𝐢𝐧𝐝 𝐢𝐭'𝐬 𝐛𝐞𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐝𝐞𝐬𝐭𝐫𝐨𝐲𝐞𝐝 𝐛𝐲 𝐚 𝐬𝐮𝐩𝐞𝐫𝐧𝐚𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐚𝐥 𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐜𝐞, 𝐈𝐯𝐲 𝐭𝐞𝐚𝐦𝐬 𝐮𝐩 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞 𝐮𝐧𝐞𝐱𝐩𝐞𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐢𝐞𝐬 𝐢𝐧 𝐡𝐨𝐩𝐞𝐬 𝐭𝐨 𝐬𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐲 𝐭𝐨𝐰𝐧 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐠𝐫𝐞𝐰 𝐮𝐩 𝐢𝐧 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐚𝐥𝐨𝐧𝐠 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐚𝐲 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐬 𝐭𝐨 𝐟𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐲 𝐛𝐨𝐲 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐬𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐞 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝 𝐧𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐟𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐟𝐨𝐫 "𝐈 𝐰𝐢𝐥𝐥 𝐚𝐥𝐰𝐚𝐲𝐬 𝐰𝐚𝐧𝐭 𝐭𝐨 𝐛𝐞 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫𝐬 𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐧 𝐢𝐟 𝐈 𝐧𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐠𝐞𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐜𝐡𝐚𝐧𝐜𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐛𝐞."Abgeschlossene Geschichte
An OC review book for those who want feedback on their characters. I give constructive criticism and I try to give non-biased feedback. Started: July 2017 Completed: October 2017 Highest Ranking: #702 in Random
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