I See You
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I wasn't supposed to see anything ever again. But one day, I did.
Seventeen year old Mackenzie Porter suddenly became blind from an undetected condition she'd had from birth. It came as a such as a shock, and her life and everything in it seemed to be ruined.
Not really ready yet, Mack is forced to return to her school after months of being taken out of school to make this new and terrifying life easier for her.
She despised the thought of going back, but she had to, and she did. She felt like she could never go back to normal life.
Until she saw him.
It gave her hope. A sickening amount of hope, and delight.
But she couldn't help but wonder... why? Why could she see him?
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