In my eyes
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After a long pause she muttered "I miss the old you, the sweet you, I hate this version of you, the one where you're yelling... and acting heartless..."
I was in shock "Heartless? B!tch I've been there for you!" I crossed my arms
A story told from a different perspective, because the perspective of a story matters...
A sweet friendship that turned sour fast. A story of friendship loss...
The story "A story about friendship loss: she was my everything... until she wasn't" By darksun2011, but in my eyes...
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