This was English essay homework that I spent four hours on, not consistently of course. We were giving several prompts and I chose number 1, which was:
'Darkness exited and daylight took its place, creating the opportunity I had been waiting for'
Use this in a story.
I am still a student, barely an armature writer at best and so I would greatly appreciate constructive criticism. I want to improve my writing and maybe on day, publish a book on here.
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This was the first story that I ever wrote. As such, it is not all that great. However, I am in the process of rewriting it, so I wanted to post the original to give you guys an idea of how far I've come.