Baalveer Returns Season 3
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Last published Mon, Apr 7, 2025
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"Iss Brahamand ka ek he tasoor hain , jaha jitni zyada shakti , vaha utni he zyada bhakti" Says kaal while holding a very deep grude.
"Par akele iss bhakti se kuch nahi hoga" breathes a lady who is standing behind him.
At veerlok,shaurya's eyes wide open!
"Maine kabhi nahi socha tah ki aisa bhi ho sakta hain!"
"Kya nahi socha tah shaurya?" Asks vivan desperately.
At Bharat nagar
One can see karuna , who is weeping at her son's demise,missing him badly.
"Mujhe mera Debu chahiye,kash vo aa vapas aa jata...."
"Debu!!!!!" She screams looking at God's holy idol.
Scene changes to Bharat nagar's compund,where not just children but elders are also playing with crackers on the occasion of Diwale.Bharat nagar is looking glamourous due to the pretty decorations.
A cool breeze begins to flow...
"Aisa kyu lag raha hain ki mere Debu bhaiya yahi hain?"
And then he hears a deep scream and gets shocked!
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