Little Miss Perfectionist
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Last published Fri, Jun 27, 2025
The story quite mediocre for some,relatable and wholesome to others,life has never been easy for River always being the top student to maintain the image she made,constant behavioural ethics.An inner rebel too a few know that tho.
A loner mostly,had never experienced perfect friendship as of now,surrounded by people who either hurt her or broke her completely,even those who took advantage of her excellency and knowledge.A single child of her parents the apple of pie the perfect child everyone ever wanted her to be.
To be perfect was always out of question,The constant push from her teachers her loving parents but with silent expectations somewhere clumping her anxiety to a surge where all she could do is smile back and assure the rest.Our River Rodri Hamilton A brilliant student studying,Psychology major in attempt to achieve her selected dream of becoming a well known Psychiatrist.What such change will her life turn into when a certain someone enters into her too perfect or scattered life to change it for good.The bond which will be cherished forever.
A father daughter bond-
(Wabisabi of her life🖤📎)
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