Murder Down The Hall
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Last published Sat, Jan 23, 2016
Seventeen 7th graders get trapped in their local middle school.
With an unexpected turn of events, each teen is pressured to murder on another.
Who is truly trustworthy? Who can you survive with till the end?
When you say you'd die for someone, would you really do it?
I'd like to thank my friends for allowing me to write this.
I'd also like to note that Brady complained about 40 times a day he didn't want to be killed off.
I did a number thing, so they chose what happens to them or what they do.
They just don't know it.
(Couples and crushes weren't purposely put in situations or groups together, that's just how it turned out.)
Don't give me crap about it T_T
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