The Murderers
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As kids, Johnny and Dave were best friends; however, after a traumatizing event, Dave is out to get his revenge against Johnny and will stop at nothing to get his way. Along with the help of his super powered friends, he sets out to destroy the world of his former top pal.
This is an action story, but it spends a lot of the time setting up characters and exploring dynamics leading up to the climactic conclusion. It does take a few chapters to get to the action, but I think the destination makes the journey worth it.
This is my only action story, so please comment and tell me how I did and how I could improve for future stories or a possible rewrite or, a more likely, sequel. Thanks so much.
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