The Murderers
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  • Membaca 685
  • Suara 38
  • Bagian 12
  • Durasi 51m
Lengkap, Awal publikasi Mei 07, 2015
As kids, Johnny and Dave were best friends; however, after a traumatizing event, Dave is out to get his revenge against Johnny and will stop at nothing to get his way. Along with the help of his super powered friends, he sets out to destroy the world of his former top pal.

     This is an action story, but it spends a lot of the time setting up characters and exploring dynamics leading up to the climactic conclusion. It does take a few chapters to get to the action, but I think the destination makes the journey worth it.

     This is my only action story, so please comment and tell me how I did and how I could improve for future stories or a possible rewrite or, a more likely, sequel. Thanks so much.

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Nothing is worse than seeing the guy you love with another girl, what makes it even worst is the fact that he is your best friend. Read my story for full description ☺️ (Btw this story was published on my other Wattpad account which I don't currently have access to. I've been trying to log back into that account for a long while now so that I could finish this story but it has been very problematic for me and I can't seem to get back into that account no matter how hard I try. I'm very passionate about writing and this story has been very dear to me so I've decided to continue writing this book on this new account. For those of you who have been a fan of this book from day one thank you. You can continue reading this book right here. Thank you so much for the support). This book is also the rewritten version of the older one I wrote before so be prepared to see a few changes but nothing too drastic ;) Enjoy!