The Derelict's Tour Guide
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A twisted, terror-filled game of cat and mouse in deep space!
An interplanetary smuggler stumbles upon a gigantic ghost ship. He believes it to be abandoned, until he steps inside and someone hails him over a loudspeaker. The sinister deck proves to be an obstacle-rich labyrinth. The spontaneous rescue operation turns into a nightmare. The rescuer and rescuee are driven insane by mutual distrust - even before they ever met in person. The long-trapped, enigmatic woman can only rely on phonecalls to guide the astronaut to herself, all the way to the heart of the metal colossus, where everything shall be answered:
Who is the derelict's tour guide?
What sort of catastrophe caused the mountainous machine's breakdown and the crew's extinction?
Was there an ulterior motive behind the woman's luring of the captain?
Is there any hope of escaping?
11,700 words / 40 pages. Psychological thriller, in a sci-fi setting. Experimental plot. Twist upon twist. Have a good read! :)
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