Wake The Gods (First Draft)
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Follow a group of six strangers-turned-comrades, as they embark on a journey to challenge the wrath of powers and enemies unknown. Prepare to travel across the land of Salaron and exist in its storied world, meet its colorful characters, and become lost on the winding trails and paths.
Don't wake the gods. Lest we put them to sleep once more- this time for eternity.
^ When I was 16 years old, I wrote an epic that I thought was lost forever.
This is a high-fantasy book that I wrote in high school almost 25 years ago! I am finally pulling out of the vault! The impossible has also happened- I found all the notes, Maps, outlines, and plot points that I so desperately needed in order to return to this world. These are 25 year old notebooks! And now I finally go back!
At 250 pages, and hundreds of thousands of words, join me as I jump back into a world I lived in for years, chapter by chapter, to bring it back to life. I would love any and all input and support!
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