The Jester's Three Faces
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Hello everyone! This is the prologue and first chapter of a YA fantasy novel I'm writing. The main character is a teenage girl named Nixen who wants nothing more than to live safely and happily with her adoptive mother, Valaria. However, things start to get strange when a magical cat who bears an odd resemblance to an extinct magical creature bonds with Nixen. At the same time, thousands of children and babies in Nixen's world inexplicably stop growing up. As Nixen grapples with her struggle to find a true home, she starts to realize that the mysteries haunting her world may be interconnected...Things in this book that may interest you: epic fantasy, female protagonist, funny main character, original magic system, original magical creatures, romance subplot, and a matriarchal world. I will post at least one chapter per week once I've finished my second draft, but hopefully up to 3 chapters per week. I want to grow the fanbase for this novel as large as possible, so if you find the beginning of this story entertaining at all, please follow my account and vote on this book. Also, I am seeking criticism on this story because I am trying to make the story better and become a better writer. Happy reading!
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