Beyond the Line

Beyond the Line

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WpMetadataNoticeLast published Tue, Aug 5, 2025
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Fiction
Mystery
The story of beyond the line is one revolving around the theme of freedom. Freedom from societal expectations, and in the case of the story, freedom from the 2nd dimension. The sotry focuses on a set of characters, but the protagonist is Hughie, a girl living in a modern world, with technology and innovation. She is in highschool and she has always had a feeling of being caged, everyone in the town has had the feeling before. The truth is that they all are trapped in a small glode. She eventually has a dream where she essentially is convinved that it isnt just her mind playing tricks on her, but that her world is in a lesser dimension than humans and she must escape. She tries convincing her friends and eventually they find a way to see a hole in the sky, but the hole is what they have believed to be the moon. To their horror, it is actually a person's pupil, a person in the third dimension who is looking through a globe. They eventually escape and meet other people who lived in the 2nd dimenstion but eventually escaped.
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A dystopian young adult novel involving romance, secret experiments on human subjects, and a group of teenagers' will to survive. Reader Comments: "I'm gonna gush about your book real quick...all the technology has a purpose and is beautifully explained so I can picture it in my mind...the whole concept of the book is completely original...*moment of silence for your beautiful arch of character development* everything your characters do is strictly them but they develop enough to show more about themselves without you straight up telling the reader about them" -Vairl9023 "Ahh!!! This is so good!! I will be anxiously awaiting the next Chapter!!" -CrystalBagot "Brilliant...ohh, this is very catchy, good work" -IndeeMaynard "I love this so far" -BrianneMorris "You've done a great job at creating a mysterious mood" -poisonedpen *** All Evita Creedy, 17, wants is to finish her degree and be accepted for a prestigious job with the city's Department of Energy. On the way to take her placement test she sees a man take a gun out of his bag. Panicked, she reaches into her purse for her phone to call 911. Instead she takes out a gun. She doesn't know where it came from or how it got there, but when the man turns his gun on her she shoots him. It would be easy for Evita to forget about where the gun came from and let her life return to normal, but its mysterious appearance won't stop nagging at her. When Evita starts asking questions Evelyn Sheer, the head of the city's Department of Energy, takes her captive and places her in a secret, underground research facility. Evelyn Sheer and the researchers are trying to create a genetic modification that enables humans to photosynthesize. Once in the facility, Evita is tagged as a test subject and loses all say over what happens to her body. She has to escape. By the time she comes up with a plan there is only one problem. Evita isn't ready to leave.

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