The Girl Who Couldn't Forget(TGHLB one shot)

This is a scene from @TheUJelly's The Girl He Left Behind for the one shot writing contest. It is from Kim's point of view just before her suicide attempt. I decided to write about how Kim felt and what was passing through her head in those final moments. I love @TheUJelly's works and I hope I win this.

Kim is a slut, right? That's what everyone says so she must be. After a night of drunken mistakes the aftermath mortifies her. The comments, the names, it all the last straw and at the end of it all she realizes something. No one is bulletproof but she's been shot just way too many times.

I take no credit for the cover. I didn't make it.

Lastly, please comment, I want to know how I'm doing and how I can improve. Thanks.