The Detective
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Last published Fri, May 23, 2025
Donny Mathews is a detective in New Lance City, he solves cases and makes sure that people are put to justice and that people's fears are put to rest.
Except Donny has one issue... people look at him with knowing glances, as if people know something about him or this city that he does not. Sometimes the ones up top will shut down some of his cases before he figures out the truth. Sometimes he will have bouts of amnesia, completely forgetting the case. only to find bits and pieces of things relating to the case in his home.
But none of that compares to his most mysterious challenge... Samual Makson. Sometimes Donny is transported into the body of 16 year old Samual Makson and is forced to live the boy's life. Go to school, interact with his awful parents, etc. Donny decides that since he can't seem to stop going here, that he would make a life for himself. He gains hobbies and friends, things that he likes, etc.
But one day he begins to take notice of the sticky notes left for him in this other world; sticky notes that he did not place or write. He also notices that items frequently move without him even touching them, Donny now realizes that he has a new case to crack, and this time, nobody... not even the ones on top... would stop him from getting to the truth.
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