A LONG NIGHT
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Last published Tue, Jun 3, 2025
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The poem expresses deep sorrow and guilt over a past mistake that caused loss or separation. The speaker feels trapped in a dark, lonely space, haunted by memories of someone they loved who is no longer there. They long for forgiveness and atonement but are overwhelmed by the pain and loneliness. The heartbeat and silence symbolize the speaker's isolation, and the haunting presence of their guilt lingers endlessly, leaving the speaker to wish for an end to their suffering....
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This poem is made by imagining about a king and his marriage ceremony. When an enemy attacked his kingdom during his marriage,killing him and his wife. During his last moments he regretted his past as he watched his Altar(the sacred place) also the marriage decorations, and his dream burn.
As he was crawling to his wife, the grim reaper was following him it suggests us that the king was slowly dying. The lifeless body of his queen with her beautiful gown that was soaked with blood made his heart ache. He touched her for the last time.
He couldn't breathe because of the pain.
The king saw his subjects back full of lashes(sword cuts). The screams of their pain and resentment. The smell of the burning bodies and the blossom of ashes. The weight of guilt or the burden made the king regretted his prideful conquest.
At the end the King is glad that during their last moment they were together at the end.
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