Engravings Inside The Walls

Engravings Inside The Walls

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"Engravings Inside The Walls" is a raw, emotional reflection on abandonment, grief, and the lasting impact of a father's absence. Through vivid imagery and piercing honesty, the poem recounts the experience of being left behind in the wake of a fractured family, particularly in the face of a mother's death. It explores the silence, selective guilt, and half-hearted gestures of a father who moved on, while his children were left to navigate heartbreak alone. With themes of betrayal, memory, and the aching search for closure, the poem captures what it means to grieve not just a lost parent, but the illusion of a father figure who was never fully there. The "engravings" symbolize the invisible scars etched into the very fabric of life after abandonment-permanent, unspoken, and painfully unresolved.
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Jackson feels like he's slipping through the cracks of life, unseen and unloved. At 15, he struggles with doubts about whether his family and friends truly care for him or merely tolerate his presence. With his parents divorced, a strained relationship with his father, and a mother who tries but can't fully understand his pain, Jackson feels increasingly invisible. Over the course of a year, as life moves on for everyone around him, the cracks in his heart widen, and his sorrow deepens. In the end, his final words-"Look mom, I'm free"-carry a heartbreaking weight that will stay with you long after the last page.

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