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Where We First Noticed
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Complete, First published Jun 03, 2025
Kiela Mendez never saw herself as the girl you'd write love stories about-
ordinary, tahimik, NBSB since birth.
She believed in love... from a safe distance.Hanggang sa dumating si Zeus Delvano. 

An Engineering student with a smile that felt like sunlight, and eyes that looked at the world like it was all his to explore.

Too loud for her quiet.Too bright for her shadows.Too impossible to ever notice someone like her.

Pero isang araw, nagtagpo ang mga mata nila.
Saglit lang. Pero sapat na para gumulo ang puso niya.
Mula noon, napansin na niya siya.
At mas nakakagulo pa-napansin din siya ni Zeus.

No love confessions. No grand gestures.Just lingering looks. Gentle silences.Moments soft enough to be missed,
but deep enough to change everything.

Because sometimes, love doesn't arrive with fireworks-it begins with a single glance.A stolen second.A quiet noticing.

This is where it all began.
Where We First Noticed.

Started: May 3, 2025
Finished: June 12, 2025

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