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Ongoing, First published Jun 08, 2025
John Dormi had never missed a day at the gym in two years. It was more than just a routine-it was the ritual that bonded him with his best friend, Paul Browlee. The two of them pushed each other to their limits every morning, the clang of weights and the grunts of effort creating the soundtrack of their brotherhood.

"Yo, Paul! You ready to hit that 220 today? Maybe 225?" John called out with his usual grin as they warmed up.

Paul shrugged, wiping sweat from his brow. "Nah, I'm good today. Next time, maybe."

That easy camaraderie was their normal, their world. But on this night, everything changed.

John's phone buzzed relentlessly as he stepped inside his apartment. More than fifty notifications blinked on his screen-missed calls, text messages, urgent voice notes-from Paul's family. Panic rippled through him like electricity. He tapped one of the voice messages and heard Paul's mother's trembling voice.

"John, please... Paul's gone. He hasn't come home, and no one's heard from him. We don't know where he is."

His heart thudded. Paul-his best friend, his gym brother-was missing.

Without wasting a second, John grabbed his jacket and dashed out the door, heading straight to the one person he trusted to help in times like these: Detective Draken.

Draken was a man of quiet intensity-a detective who had earned his reputation solving the toughest cases under the city's darkest skies. John found him in a dimly lit office cluttered with case files and cold coffee cups, already digging through papers when John burst in.
"Detective Draken," John gasped, out of breath, "it's Paul-he's missing. His family's freaking out. I don't know what happened.".......the games just getting started ...lets see how far it goes LETS SEE HOW FAR CAN U GOO LITTLE ONE.....DRAKEN

Disclaimer: This story is a work of fiction. It contains scenes of crime investigation, psychological tension, and depictions of violence that may be disturbing to some readers. Reader discretion is advised. ...
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Book 5 of the Jackson Series! Marcella is struggling to break free from all she has ever known. Brought up in a world where she's been caged in with rules, violence and pain she longs for a better life full of freedom. But when you're in a gang escaping the life of crime is easier said than done. Deciding to let go of her inhibitions to spend an unforgettable night with a stranger it all comes crashing down when she's assigned to kill the man she can't seem to forget. *** It doesn't take me long to find Judah. He looks like poison hiding behind a pretty face, seducing you to give in before he drags you to hell for sinning. I try and think of how I can lead him away without raising suspicion. But I don't end up having to do much because Judah soon blocks my way. "Why are you hiding from me little dove?" "I'm not." I whisper back. "How about we finish what we started that day?" I blush at the memories but quickly realize this is the best excuse to get him out of the spotlight. He takes my hand before we leave through the door and check a few rooms only to figure out that they're all locked. "The rooftop's door is open." As soon as he takes the first step I trip him but he finds his footing before swinging at my ribs. What I didn't expect was for him to pounce on me and pull my dagger out of my holster before stabbing my leg. Kicking his shin with my good leg I manage to flip us over. He's just about to throw me off when I land an uppercut to his jaw. I take out my gun to end this but just as I pull the trigger I'm grabbed. "No!" I struggle as I'm tied up before they check Judah. The wound clearly missed and isn't at all fatal. I watch as he sits up with a pained groan before his eyes meet mine. "I think I'm in love." He states breathlessly with a handsome grin. Published to Wattpad: 31/12/2021 Cover: WYLD_ROSE © 2021 WYLD_ROSE ALL RIGHTS RESERVED!