Love or run?

I'm new to this so please don't judge me if I do something wrong. Just comment and tell me what I did wrong and I shall fix it.

This story followes a black haired vampire girl named Ariel. She had amazing powers but she also has a bad past. Because of her past she is afraid to leave her house in fear of hurting people. She soon finds herself badly injured and in the care of a young man named Jake. For some reason this man is really nice to her even though he knows she isn't human. Will Ariel be able to get over her fear of hurting people or will she drive herself crazy trying to avoid the strange human male Jake? Only one way to find out. Hope you enjoy the story.

The picture doesn't belong to me it's a picture I got off of zedge.

My friend AwwieHeichou helps me with this story.