The Blind Eye PT.2

The Blind Eye PT.2

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Its the year 1917 and a young woman named Adelheid is on a bus heading to 23rd regiment, most German school girls from 15-18 an were sent to dance with the Soldiers of the Great War some nights, she seethes with anger at the thought of helping these brainwashed boys. Until she finds a man named Paul Baumer, he speaks of the war in a fierce and romanticized tone. She sees how blindly he was thrown into it and try's to help him, but slowly as she gets to know him more she starts to fall in love... *DISCLAIMER, THIS IS NOT MADE TO ROMANTICIZE WAR! I WOULD NEVER DO THAT, ITS SICK!!! Plus I know the Western Front is in France so no way would German girls be sent to dance with the German Soldiers but who cares, deal with it. EXTRA PS, Some words may be in German, so don't think i'm just an awful speller,( even though I kind of am.) I AM LOGGED OUT OF MY OG ACC, I WILL POST UPDATES FROM HERE NOW ON!
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"Would you like to dance?" the boy asks me. I stare deep into his blue eyes, but I can't figure out who he is. He's tall with dark hair and the brightest blue eyes I've ever seen. I know everyone at this school, but with his features hidden behind his mask I can't tell who he is. "Sure, I would love to." Did I just say that? I agreed to dance with a random boy who I don't know. He takes my hand and leads me to the dance floor. We dance for a few songs and then he asks me, "Would you like to take a walk? I know the perfect place." I nod and he pulls me behind him off the dance floor. We leave the hotel and start walking down a little path. At the end of the path I notice a little fountain surrounded by candles. I wonder if he set this up. We walk over to the fountain and we sit down on the edge. "I had a wonderful time tonight," says the guy. He reaches to his face and removes his mask. I recognize him immediately. How did I not know it before? *** Carter Bennett has managed to survive her first 3 years of high school. Everything has been amazing... for the most part. She had her life completely planned out. And everything was on track. Until she met one boy. William Aston, one the school's most popular residents. Being the school's football captain, incredibly handsome and an all around nice guy. And to top it all off, every girl's dream guy. He could have anyone he wanted. But he chose the girl he could end up suffering the most in the end with. Will Carter and Will's families and friends end up driving the two apart? Will Carter's strange past drive Will away? Can Carter and Will power through their tough challenges for the one thing they have never truly experienced. Love. *COMPLETED*

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