The Blind Eye PT.2
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Its the year 1917 and a young woman named Adelheid is on a bus heading to 23rd regiment, most German school girls from 15-18 an were sent to dance with the Soldiers of the Great War some nights, she seethes with anger at the thought of helping these brainwashed boys. Until she finds a man named Paul Baumer, he speaks of the war in a fierce and romanticized tone. She sees how blindly he was thrown into it and try's to help him, but slowly as she gets to know him more she starts to fall in love...
*DISCLAIMER, THIS IS NOT MADE TO ROMANTICIZE WAR! I WOULD NEVER DO THAT, ITS SICK!!!
Plus I know the Western Front is in France so no way would German girls be sent to dance with the German Soldiers but who cares, deal with it. EXTRA PS, Some words may be in German, so don't think i'm just an awful speller,( even though I kind of am.)
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